Peer Review
Peer Review For the cover page of my magazine, my peers had a few suggestions. One of the suggestions was to make the selling line larger. Right now, the selling line is very small, so that it is not overwhelming, but it is too small. Also, my peers stated t hat I should move all my articles down the left side of the page, except for the feature article. The last thing for the cover page is to add the date and year. For the content page, they said the picture is very good, the article sizes and fonts and colors are good as well, and that it has a very plain, professional look. There is a little bit of space at the bottom of my content page and people suggested that I add a little catchy phrase to the bottom, just to fill in the page. For the 1 st page of the feature article, the title of the feature article is difficult to read. They suggested I either change th...